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You're my Angel

Poem By: kaylalebreton
Poetry


Tags: angel, sun, dreams, day, and, night

it doesnt matter what you say i will still love you !! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 6, 2008    Reads: 48    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


You’re my angel

Night and Day

In my dreams

In my thoughts

 

But why did you have to leave especially

When I needed you the most

You where my sunshine on a rainy day

You where my cure when I was sick

But you left me alone like a leaf in the wind

There just one thing I have to say,

 

You’re still my Angel

Night and Day

You’re still in my dreams

You’re still in my thoughts

It doesn’t matter what you say


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Comments:

awww i loved it!!

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

Author Comment:

thank's
but i really dont like it myself but glad you did...

:( So Know How This Feels
The person i loved the most has just walked out on me :(
xxx

Posted: Apr 28, 2008

Author Comment:

OH thank you darling :)

Why have I not read this before? I am utterly confused at my stupidity :(

If one such as I were to be so blind and unbelievably overlook such talent again, then may the fires of hell condemn me to an eternity of sorrow and deprivation.

Dramatic, no? That is what happens when I read genius, such as yours. :)

Keep writing Dear Tilla, maybe one day the whole world will be able to enjoy the true genius behind your plentiful, inspiring words. For I certainly have :)

Then they too, will be speaking and writing in a similar fashion as I. :)

(By the way I don't normally speak like this, I believe your genius has rubbed off on me. I will surely be myself again in the morning... hopefully.)

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

hahahaha
OMG u make me laugh so much ...
i am so glad that u liked it
thank you very much :)

This is great, and I can totally relate to this. I've carried on loving someone, even though they went.

Posted: May 19, 2008

Author Comment:

iam glad you liked it
thanx for the comment :)



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