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This is a poem that I had posted previously on a different account, but I deleted it and moved it. I's about a girl playing guitar...I've been told it's some of my best. Read on! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 16, 2008    Reads: 23    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


Notes pouring from my guitar

Not my notes

Pleasing to the ear

 But not mine

Never mine

If I had my own notes,

What would they be?

A tune

Never heard before

Not beautiful

Because life is not beautiful

Not smooth and lilting

Because life’s course never runs smooth

But mine, all mine.

My notes

Flowing from my guitar

Waiting for the world to come and hear

My song.


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It was great, but i already knew that!!! :D:D Anywho blah blah blah It was great! Adios!!

Sunshine is better when its not clouded.

~angelgirl

Posted: Jun 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Sure...

YES for sure...Have faith and there is no looking back...this indeed is lovely...

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

You're too kind!



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