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Friendships built, never part

Poem By: kellymarie64
Poetry


a short poem about when u meet friends you know you'll never let go. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Mar 30, 2008    Reads: 47    Comments: 5    Likes: 1   


Friendships built, Never part!

With a smile on their face

A spark in their heart.

Friends that know they never will part.

Secrets made and kept real tight.

Among a friendship that feels so right!

Nights out or nights in,

Whichever is best.

With these two I lay past to rest.

Friends before not been as they should,

Not helping me the way they could.

A connection made one night, we three.

Best friends I know we always will be!

Kelly Brett


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Comments:

Wonderful poem. It flowed very nice, and I liked the way you chose your words. Great job.

Posted: Mar 30, 2008

Author Comment:

hey mystory, thanks alot for ur kind words, it means loads that ppl are being kind, was very nervous publishing my first poem lol. very vulnerable when it comes to my writing.
kelly xx

Nothing like friends.

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

oh too true, lol.
xx

Sarah
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Very good poem, always lots of heart

Posted: Apr 2, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you very much, i like to think im all heart! lol xx

Hey Kelly, this is so nice with great sentiment. 11 thumbs up. Please read more of my stuff.

Posted: Apr 7, 2008

Author Comment:

hi eric, thanks for the nice comment, i am working my way through your work in between dealing with the kids lol. u have so much, my writing portfolio slightly pails in comparison, hehe. but im working on some new stuff at the mo so more should be added soon. x

Excellent work here. Keep this up.

Posted: Apr 30, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks wolffe glad u liked it, kelly x



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