This is an insight in to me really, a look at how i felt when i met my husband when i was 16yrs. lol
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Submitted: Mar 31, 2008    Reads: 41    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   

Our Eyes meet

Our hearts beat

My brow sweats

We've finally met

Our hands touch

His feels rough

My stomach rolls

That dark hole

I've felt hidden

I've been found

My heart held

But never bound

I've found my ONE!

Kelly Brett

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poewhit

Has that tone of contentment

Posted: Mar 31, 2008

Author Comment:

thank u so much for putting that comment, that was the tone i was hoping to achieve.
kel xx

Eric JHRB Egan

Very good, soft, sweet and a tender rhyme which works in conjunction with your theme. 14 thumbs up.

Posted: Apr 7, 2008

Author Comment:

oh thank you so much, that is just the kind of comment i was hoping to get when i read this back to myself before posting it. many thanks to you. xx

wolffe

Not bad at all. a little much soft. keep trying.

Posted: Apr 30, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for the comment, kelly x

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