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Submitted: Mar 30, 2008 Reads: 42 Comments: 6 Likes: 1
Taboo Lover
As the sun goes down at dusk,
The lovers part for they know they must.
With eyes blurred and heads still weak.
They agree reluctant, never to speak,
About the love that they have felt,
It made their heart and bodies melt.
They walk along the dimly lit street,
Holding hands, not being discreet.
For they know in their hearts
It never can last.
They are falling in love way to fast.
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Aww, that's so sweet! :D I loved it, it was very well written. Great job.
Posted: Mar 30, 2008
I loved it, I look forward to more! :) ~ Nixie
Posted: Mar 30, 2008
Keep up the good work
Posted: Apr 2, 2008
great stuff, love the rhyming couplets, gives the poem a sad but beautiful tone. there should be an anthology of all the best poetry on this site, and this would surely b in it.
Posted: Apr 4, 2008
Very well realized. 11 thumbs up.
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
Written well. *shrugs* I think you could add more to this.
Posted: Apr 30, 2008
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