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What Have We Become?

Poem By: Kenalyn
Poetry


Tags: good, bad, evil, poetry

Good and Bad feelings View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 24, 2008    Reads: 42    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


Dedication, Consideration, Appreciation, Integration
Good feelings how they soar,
Adoration, Commendation, Elation and Restoration 
We must not ignore.

Discrimination, Vulgarization, Segregation, Retaliation
Evil is the rule of thumb,
Annihilation, Castration, Extermination and Condemnation
What have we become?


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Comments:

Condemnationis not so bad. All feeling are good and bad to some extent. I like this, though I will not call it a poem. But poetry is defined by the poet, not the reader. So who I am to say it is not what it is.

Posted: Aug 24, 2008

its to pretty, but you seem to have potentioan, take a look at my poet tree and learn nothing, Lucien remeese with kisses

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

i listen to those who condemn america and england for what we are doing oversea's may be they have a point but i ask , where were they when hussain's son and his henchmen were raping innocent women , or killing innocent children , who condemned that , the same people scream condemnation for all that is going on in zimbabwe , our leaders will eventually do the right thing and intervene , who will be condemned then ?
the poem invites comment , so its a duzy .

Posted: Sep 2, 2008



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