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A poem about losing someone special. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 11, 2008 Reads: 69 Comments: 4 Likes: 2
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Aww, this is really sad, makes me wonder what happened. Nice acrostic by the way.
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
It's really beautiful, a decleration of feeling, very sad and touching. Maybe one day you will be able to look back.
Posted: Jun 12, 2008
hi! kevin. losing is so painful, especially love. one day, u'll look back and think of it a dream. well done. ;-)
Posted: Jun 13, 2008
I love the last 2 lines of this poem, Kevin. The wistfulness these lines express is very touching, and to me they perfectly describe what it's like losing someone you truly cared about. I thought this was a wonderfully sad and emotional poem.
Stephanee :)
Posted: Jun 18, 2008
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