A secret glance of hope,
A gentle gasp of joy,
The happiness within,
Glows like rain dancing with the wind
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Poem By: kidarox123
Poetry
Tags: poetry
Just a short,smiple, poem, that even i don't know what it means.lol! View table of contents...
Submitted: May 1, 2008 Reads: 64 Comments: 6 Likes: 2
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Although rain is often associated with "a dark and stormy night", the "glowing,dancing rain" here is a magical ray of happiness and hope.
Posted: May 4, 2008
Ah, what a nice image! Short and sweet, I love it! ~ Gypsy
Posted: May 8, 2008
excellent! you were able to express imagery in just four lines!
Posted: May 8, 2008
Light and lovely, I liked it!
Posted: May 20, 2008
this makes me miss the rain here...I wish it would because it's beautiful fuel for all life
Posted: Jun 6, 2008
Very cool, I loved it! Very simply sweet! Bravo and Brava
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
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