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Submitted: May 8, 2008 Reads: 93 Comments: 10 Likes: 6
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HA! I didn't get it till the punch line! Very cleaver. I thought it was about an actual person at first, and it threw me. Great job!
Posted: May 8, 2008
Now....Er....well....nope there is NOTHING that justifies how accurately and bang on the money you nailed this.
Love the way you keep us guessing who you could be talking about then wallop us with the friend all of us have met at one time or another!
Posted: May 8, 2008
Ho! Very nice! I loved the bam! at the end. Great job!
Posted: May 8, 2008
Dangit, I always have to read your poems twice to appreciate them! Just great! I'm imagining someone stabbing you and beating you down and then it's some 'stupid' thing like 'love' *pretends to rolls eyes but really smiling*
Posted: May 8, 2008
ouu, perfect ending, haha. didn't see that comming. I love the irony in the poem, how it hurts you yet you want it. Very good my lovely! Keep it up!
Steph:)
Posted: May 9, 2008
kb great poem. the ending was not what i thought it would be but it was great. The things love does to us, but we never want to be without it.
take care
snow x
Posted: May 9, 2008
Love it!! You did this amazingly! I thought you were talking about a person until i got to the end! Great job!
Posted: May 10, 2008
hello, yes i really liked this poem, some great metaphors for that age old bully who just wont leave us alone. I love the line wanted bully, a great play on words, how we can desire something that can bring pain (and of course happiness) The first time I read Shakespeare’s sonnets I fell in love with the brutality of love. How could someone make pain sound so beautiful? I think Shakespeare wrote the dictionary to all our lives. But im moving away from your poem, or maybe it reminds me of Will…this is the greatest compliment I could write about your poem. Yes it is wonderful writing!!!
Posted: May 12, 2008
I love this poem... it's such a great representation of love/hate relationships. Great twist at the end too! It was done fantastically! Keep it coming, KB!!
Posted: May 12, 2008
Great poem , and Love it is a friend that sometimes it was better keep himself away from us , but for a little time !
Posted: May 15, 2008
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