Eager Hand, Shy Fingers

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Poem By: Kinkyboots
Poetry

Tags: hand, fingers, shy, eager, desire

I'm not sure about this one, does it work? Who knew it were so hard to find words to rhyme with fingers? View table of contents...

Submitted: Jun 5, 2008 Reads: 280 Comments: 7 Likes: 6

Eager hand

Holds Shy fingers

The dust does settle

Though eager hand lingers

Shy fingers,

Under Eager hand

The palm does heckle

Shy fingers as planned

Eager hand

Over Shy fingers

Places gentle pressure

Driving shy to stingers

Till Shy fingers,

Flips Eager hand

And eager stingers entwine

Clamping, shackled, wham!

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Comments:

Jak Sylvian

LOL I think it works just fine, you did set yourself a toughie rhyming with fingers.... You could have slapped in "gingers" I suppose, quite where I have no idea.....

*Looks ever so innocent*

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Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL Gingers? You make me die with laughter! Ah well, next time I will be sure to choose something easier. :) Thanks Jak, alway's love your comments! ~ Nixie

RodneyF

I find the imagery very subtle and maybe not what you meant as you composed it.

The palms
Two bodies,
The fingers
The limbs,
Responding to
that urgent call

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

I think you may have a good point there Rodney, I was trying to do something a little different, my poetry is usually soft, but I guess it writes its self sometimes and no matter what you do it is what it is. Thank you again for reading, I really appreciate it. ~ Nixie

bubbly

hi! kb.

said mr clinger, holding a derringer
kb's poem'll linger, as its a harbinger.

lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 6, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL Thanks for the laugh Bubbly, I like it! :) ~ KB

stephhlebreton

aww, great poem KB. I really enjoyed it, it was cute, lol, made me smile, great job!
Steph(:

Posted: Jun 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Steph! Anything for a smile. Thank you for reading!! :) ~ KB

Classy Peach

How did I miss this hot little sucker?

*smack on the ass
that's what this reminded me of.

I just read it again, do I ever like it! Maybe even love it!!

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Classy loves it? I'm grinning like a fool!! Hah, and a smack on the ass is a compliment I think! Thanks, you Classy Peach you! ~ KB

Pratibha

Hi Buddy !!

this is SOFT and FREE FLOWING WITH LOTS OF CUTE IMAGERY....and "TOUCHED" heart somewhere with the innocence....
Boy, i am glad i read this....i would have missed 'softness' of hot poems.....lol...

If u don't mind, i have a question....
Is ur Name NIXIE?

Sorry , just curiousity.....because u have written that in some of ur responses above....lol....i am a tubelight for sure....

Posted: Jun 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha! So this is how you knew? Shh, it's a secret... I left my name by accident. I'm a dummy! lol Thank you for yet another awesome comment, you're a star for reading all of my stories, you really are! Love ya! ~ KB