The look in her eye
The taste of her lips
The spill of affection
From her fingertips
The screams of passion
A disguise for lust
She’s my desire
She's the one I love
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The spill of affection
Poem By: Kinkyboots
Poetry
I've decided to embrace poetry, where as before now I brushed it aside. I guess what I'm saying is I'm going to post them whether they stick or not, so I hope you enjoy! View table of contents...
Submitted: May 5, 2008 Reads: 96 Comments: 16 Likes: 12
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i love this poem. it explains so much in just a few words. love this poem
cheese to you!
Posted: May 5, 2008
Hey KB....where ya been? (evil smirk)
This is a lovely lovely poem and the picture rocks too! And the title is luring. So, who's the inspiration here? Love it!
Posted: May 5, 2008
Short & sweet
Posted: May 5, 2008
loved this one KB....I wish i could mine short and sweet as well...
i wish...
lucky girl....
Posted: May 5, 2008
Hi Kinkyboots!
Greetings from the Black Forest. A wonderful poem but pray, why "a disguise for lust," when the screams of passion have already been performed or uttered? I liked it. Thanks for sharing.
Regards,
Satis
Posted: May 6, 2008
The spill of affection
From her fingertips
The screams of passion
do they mean something more adult? or is that just my sick teenage mind? lol
nice one. the picture is a 'real' heart right? i remember disecting a heart in scinece, half the girls didn't believe it was a heart becose it didn't look like a love heart! lol
Posted: May 6, 2008
I really like this poem it expresses so much in so few words........
It sums up how affection and passion combine.
More poems please
Peace
Boneman
Posted: May 6, 2008
Tor Steinsland
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No dilly dally there, but right to the point. I enjoyed reading this.
Posted: May 7, 2008
One word, just 3 letters - WOW!
As mentioned before, short, straight and to the point but sums up lust perfectly when in the midst of that emotion words are fairly low down in the importance list.
Under the collar warming stuff, can't wait for more!!!!!
Posted: May 7, 2008
I just thought a very naughty comment to this poem, but then I'm a naughty girl and you probably don't want X-rated comments.
So let me just say that this poem was great and sexy.
Posted: May 8, 2008
wow, so beautiful and passionate. Lovely words, it was brilliant. wow, haha, that`s the best word I can use for it WOW.
Steph:)
Posted: May 9, 2008
Wonderful job KB. you really show so much passion in this poem. I love it. Can't wait to read more of your work.
Posted: May 9, 2008
amazing job. as always. you know im one of your biggest fans [:
Posted: May 10, 2008
The spill of affection says it all. Wonderful poem. I read it twice.
Posted: May 12, 2008
hey, a lovely little poem, theres a sweetness to it that can only be written by a lot of affection. nice ryhmes too, except lust, it doesn't seem to follow any other rhyme scheme in the poem. anyway, does it matter the poems so lovely to read, some very subtle images too, I love the “spill of affection from her fingertips” wonderful writing. you defiantly should write more poetry
Posted: May 13, 2008
Very Nice ! Who's this poem is dedicated must be very happy , it is what i can say.
Posted: May 15, 2008
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