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This was inspired by Raindowns poem What I Like About Men! Thank you Rain for the idea! View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 27, 2008 Reads: 378 Comments: 19 Likes: 9
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I love it KB. I can tell that you were inspired by someone with this. Excellent job. Alot of what you said is what I like about women too. But must of all how they are the ultimate mystery. Men never knowing what they are going to do next. You did an excellent job on this. Of course you do an excellent job on all your work on here. :)
Posted: Jul 27, 2008
I think that mysteries
like soft gentle lips
should be caressed
lvingly
and longingly
softly stroked
eased
teased apart
Well done kinky boots, good poem.
Posted: Jul 27, 2008
i loved the humour of this beautiful poem and the admission's of course but i would dearly like to know why you find shoe shop's so alluring . they say men only buy big things , if they have small widgies , i suppose that's why i love big cars etc but trekking around shoe shops ?
Posted: Jul 28, 2008
Op!
How demure yet straight up!
I love love love when you write like this KB. It's fun and free spirited and makes me tingle! Serious! Light hearted fun and then I wonder....but it's sexy wondering!
I've read it 10 times and giggle each and every time.
Sexy Kinky Boots & Panties!
weeeeeeeeeeeee..........Peach flits away light as a butterfly thanks to KB rubbing her neck with such sensual poetry....
Posted: Jul 28, 2008
Another way to look at this... Not a bad way don't get me wrong... It's a fun way a light hearted way and in a different light way...
Like it alot...
MEL
Posted: Jul 29, 2008
Bravo KB You did it! Oh, I wanted to be the first one to read this~I waited;) I've been sick for a while~feeling better, not enough to comment anywhere else, not tonight; but I had to see this, so here goes~
(reading)... ... ...
Posted: Jul 29, 2008
Well done KB, Touche I think is appropriate~yes? You matched me stanza by stanza and I enjoyed every line;)
The way you put different ideas together to accentuate them was superb!
I like stanza three, a womans compassion can know no bounds, her passion either...nice.
This was good fun to read! I know more keeps comming to you...what else KB?
~rain
Posted: Jul 31, 2008
We dudes are lost if you gals circulate these secrets too widely. How can we compete with panties & boots & pillow talk?
Posted: Aug 5, 2008
Simply Smooth....Smooth
Posted: Aug 11, 2008
Kinkyboots:
Most enjoyable. Gave it an "I Like It" vote.
More can be said on this topic. Most assuredly.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
Posted: Aug 16, 2008
I liked it very much. This poem was really good.
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
Cheery stuff, KB - like it!
Posted: Sep 2, 2008
u know what both of u are bombs...this poem made my day ...Well..this one unravelled the mysteries of women...
Are we not the BEST creation by GOD ?
And i so glad that u wrote this for all of us...reading the comments given my above male members of booksie sure is flattering and THANKS TO YOU buddy for dedicating this to women....
Posted: Sep 16, 2008
Yes, please go on. I LIKE those things, er, people too. Very entertaining. Thanks.
craaig
Posted: Sep 22, 2008
Great , now i have one more reason to like women !
Posted: Sep 23, 2008
soft peachy thighs - Amusing
Posted: Sep 26, 2008
one of my fav's....
Posted: Oct 16, 2008
i love this poem gonna have to start a favs list
Posted: Nov 19, 2008
cool cherry toppings! =p
Posted: Nov 29, 2008
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