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Submitted: Apr 11, 2008 Reads: 70 Comments: 6 Likes: 4
I took a shining object,
as sharp as I could find,
and I made a pretty picture,
from deep within my mind.
This picture on my wrist,
it made my skin turn red.
After it was over,
the skin right there was dead.
Cutting is a slow death,
and an interesting deal.
The point is that you feel good,
when you cannot feel.
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I LOVE the first verse, it so awsoem. i liked how u changed the colors and size of the words. it gave more effect!
Posted: Apr 11, 2008
Wow you like death huh? Dark theme but you are good at expressing it, 9 thumbs up.
Posted: Apr 11, 2008
This was interesting, I'm pretty open minded and I've had a friend that did this to themself a lot. Hard to understand if your not the person doing it, but I think this is a good poem and very thought provoking. Good job! ~ Nixie
Posted: Apr 11, 2008
You are quite the poet!
I've read some of your poems and each one is extremely emotional and raw. This particular one is outstanding.
I marvel at your cunning ability to portray a moment in time so vividly to many people who do not experience such deep pain.
The last 2 lines are excellent.
You've got a wonderful open mind and thanks for sharing with us.
Posted: Apr 11, 2008
This one is well written and explains the motives behind a person who self harms. Feeling good when you cannot feel sums it up. To numb, to escape, to feel something. Very sad.
Posted: Apr 12, 2008
um... beautiful poem, keep up your "evil-theme" :p
Posted: Aug 25, 2008
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