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Help! I'm in love

Poetry By: Kritika
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This poem has been written in the viewpoint of Seth Clearwater (from twilight).

I was provided the title and the random line " I climb, I slip, I fall"


I hoped to capture his anguish when he falls in love with someone BUT doesn't wish to hurt her because of his alter-ego, A Wolf.

I hope you enjoy it! :)

All comments and criticism is welcome...


Submitted:Jul 15, 2010    Reads: 185    Comments: 25    Likes: 9   


Help! I'm in love!



I remember the day
When I first saw you
Everything ceased to exist
You were too good to be true

But why,oh! why, did it have to be this way
I must leave ,but I wish to stay
Have to let you know
How I feel inside
How you make my world go round
How your mere presence, makes my heart pound

You don't know what you do to me
How long will it be,before you see
I climb,I slip, I fall
My feelings for you,I can no more stall.

I'll rip my heart and give it away
So that it won't hurt me again this way
So near,yet so far ,You can never be mine
But keep this,my heart,because now it's thine.......





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