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A Mi Amor

Poem By: KyLin
Poetry


Wrote for my 11th month anniversary...not giving it to him though =] View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 26, 2007    Reads: 146    Comments: 6    Likes: 0   


The day begins with eyes so cold,
Glaring soft into darkness old.
Soft hands grab me, pulling me close
He is the person I want the most.

Blue eyes into mine, falling so low;
Casting into brown an eerie glow.
I want him so bad, I think he knows
This is why he teases so.

A tantalizing taste of love on lips,
His hands move seductively over my hips.
He's pulling me tight, I'm finally free
So handsomely moving atop of me

Our bodies contort to one another
He knows I want him, and none other.
He smiles down at me, kissing me soft
His emotions toward me are all I sought

Each breath matching as passion stirs
Our own little world of Magick unfurls.
He's getting closer and my eyes are locked
As he begins to fun, I go into shock

I can hardly believe this! He's chosen me!
The alarm starts buzz, it was all just a dream...


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Comments:

KyLin:

All my best dreams end the same way. Most enjoyable. Nice rhyming and rhythm. Liked it. A lot.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Feb 26, 2007

Author Comment:

!! Thank you! Though I'm still a little too shy to give it to the person it was written to...^-^ But thank you once more for the comment ^-^

This is beautiful. The feeling... it makes my own heart flutter. If you gave it to him, he'd be very pleased. :D

Posted: Feb 26, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you for the comment. I think I am going to give it to him...eventually. =]

Those are the seeds of love to be sown in life. That is what life is made of DREAMS.

Posted: Feb 27, 2007

Author Comment:

Poetic. =] That made sense to me, actually =P Thanks for the comment.

Your feelings in this poem are so there!
everything is said so musicaly.
Beautiful piece

Posted: Feb 27, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you!! =]
I worked hard on something that conveys my feelings. =P Thanks again

love the surprise ending ! sounds so familiar..dreams end, darn, darn, darn....:)--go on give it to him--might make a dream come true...

Posted: Feb 27, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you for the comment. Never know, it just might. =]
Makes me kinda really want to give it to him now. =P

young love...dont we all know about that

Posted: Feb 27, 2007

Author Comment:

Hai, I guess we do. =] Thank you for the comment ^_^



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