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This child's prayer...

Poem By: LaughingRain
Poetry


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Submitted: Jul 10, 2008    Reads: 51    Comments: 5    Likes: 1   


Your mighty word
Holds the world in hand
And beneath Your wings
Do the nations stand
Your shelter is
My life's whole being
And in Your truth
Does freedom ring
The simplest of prayers
Do your ears seek to know
And the humblest request
Does Your mercy bestow
From the depths of Your love
Is my heart flung wide
And in Your grace
Does my soul confide
Father of Zion
With love so pure
Keep now this child
In Your arms secure.


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Comments:

Really Beautiful And Well Put. I Enjoyed It.

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I penciled it in on the front of my school binder a couple of years ago and it kind of stuck, I've fixed it up a bit since then but I'm amazed at how easily it came.

Anzell
(not registered user)

Beautifull

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks. :)

AWESOME!!! i totally love this...this is going in my literature folder...if you don't mind it will also say by Kati...so yeah LOVE IT!!! it's so beautiful and well put. I Enjoyed every second of it....you always amaze me
xoxo
DOM!!

Posted: Jul 31, 2008

Author Comment:

Ookkay, I probably should have read this comment first instead of last *rolls eyes* Yeah, no problem about the lit folder. I was wigging out there with the other comments like "does this girl like have power over books or something? She's going to put in the lit books...commander of words? Master or pages?" No problem, Kati's me name and fun's me game. Thanks AGAIN! *is now too warm and squishy to type and must run off to write stories*

love love loved it! :)

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I can't really think of anything creative to respond with hahah, so, yeah--thanks!

i luv it

Posted: Aug 19, 2008

Author Comment:

Cool, thanks. :)



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