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Submitted: Aug 16, 2008 Reads: 43 Comments: 5 Likes: 3
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Wow that's really good. :D Awesomeness. She grew without knowing. :D You spelled here instead of her in the 5th line. XD
Posted: Aug 16, 2008
Awww I love it. Well done like.
Posted: Aug 17, 2008
Very nice, well done on the imagery and emotion. Good job yo!
Posted: Aug 17, 2008
Awwww...that was so beutiful i loved it.
Posted: Aug 18, 2008
That was brilliant, too be honest I have goosebumps. An image popped into my head, every moment in between (to me) are two mirrors facing each other, every residual movement is a second out of sync. I liked dark alley ways and winding roads for metaphors for life, without being too obvious, because that's what life really is isn't it? You can never see clearly how things will unfold. That was my interpretation anyhow. =)
Posted: Oct 4, 2008
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