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this is for kitty08's challenge. i hope you like it. oh! the character is: a fairy/' a girl(kinda)
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word:torture
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Submitted: Jun 16, 2008 Reads: 37 Comments: 7 Likes: 4
I am a fairy
not seen, nor believed in;
not wanted, nor cared for.
When you go to sleep in your home
and your dreams begin
I will appear if you wish me to.
But do not lure me in
and make me think Im real
to you.
I am tortured by your dreams
that trick me into thinking these things.
I know i mean nothing to you.
You're a heartless girl
and I'm a make-believe thing,
but we both are deceived
by your hopless dreams.
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Wow, very good job. :) I can almost even feel the fairy's pain..very good.
Posted: Jun 16, 2008
poor fairy :(
well i thought the poem was great ^^ i really felt sorry for the fairy and i just wanted to make it better.
keep up the great writing :)
Posted: Jun 16, 2008
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Aweeehh! The poor fairy.
The poem was fantastic! It was so sad but sweet at the same time. It painted such a cool picture in my head. Heh. I love it.
Keep it up. XD
~!~Megan~!~
Posted: Jun 16, 2008
this is really cute...I like it a lot ;P
Posted: Jun 19, 2008
awwwww
...
i like it
.. its soo sweet
...
poor fairy...
...
.
x
Posted: Jun 21, 2008
sorry it took me so long to get to this
put I'm so glad I read it
I feel so sad for the fairy but I loved this poem
:]
Posted: Jun 21, 2008
I like it alot.
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
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