Love's a Viciuos Battle

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Poem By: LifexSucksxLovexSucks
Poetry

Tags: love, relationships, suck, done, over you

This is about an ex-girlfriend of mine. she was my one and only true love. not anymore. View table of contents...

Submitted: Mar 29, 2008 Reads: 60 Comments: 9 Likes: 4

I can’t wait till the day

When you realize you miss me

By then I’ll have moved on

And found someone who really cares

And when that day comes

You’ll know then how I feel now

Yeah baby, there’s something you gotta learn

Love’s a vicious battle, and there’s only one way to win

You gotta be open

You gotta be true

You gotta be honest and trusting

You gotta be everything I was for you

I remember the promises we made

I remember the promises you broke

You were my true love, still are

But you killed me inside

And I’m done with you babe

Now you want me back

Now you say you’re sorry

Well you know what baby?

You should be

The pain you put me through is unforgivable

The heartbreak you caused is irreversible

You say you don’t know what you were thinking

Well, whatever it was, I just don’t care anymore

Love’s a vicious battle baby,

Get used to it

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Comments:

seesawmae

this is a really good poem, it's so true. I liked the emotion. breaking up is really sad, but usually there's a reason, a true deep meaning. it;s good that you're moving on, you'll find someone else, there are a lot of people in this world. but great writing!

Posted: Mar 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks a lot! :)

yonaika
(not registered user)

This poem reminds me of my friend's problem with his ex [his name is rob too!] I sent it to him cause it is exactly what he feels like!
Good luck an keep writing!

Posted: Mar 29, 2008

Ghiradelli Girl

Oh wow! This is like some movie I watched a couple of days ago. Your poem really shows a lot of emotion-- it kind've reminded me of a song when I read the second stanza^-^! I'm clicking on the like-it button:).

Lot's of special chocolate to you,

Ghiradelli Girl.

Posted: Mar 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks :)

poewhit

Thats getting it out

Posted: Mar 29, 2008

XBrokenHeartedX

Wow, a lot of emotion in this poem. It's powerful to state those things. I really like the first stanza, and the rhymes here and there. Though I would have left out babe and baby because for me it messed up the flow a bit. Still a great read, and you have much talent:)

Posted: Mar 30, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks for the advice. :)

Hugs and kisses

I agree with Ghiradelli Girl, it sounds a lot like a song. It could BE a song if you wanted it to be ^_^ But I really liked it. The poem was honest and I liked the whole. Thing. I'm going to click the "I liked it" button ^_^

Posted: Mar 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much. :)
i have a guitar arrangement, but i haven't tried fitting them together.

mystory

I've gone through something just like this before. It's the worst thing in thw world. Great poem, I really liked it. Keep up the good work. :D

Posted: Mar 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. :)

CatcherBabe34

That poem was amazing! I probably liked it so much because I can relate. When u said "you gotta be everything i was for you" omg that was great. ull find a girl that'll treat u right. keep writing!

Posted: Mar 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. :)

Naughty girl

Love is a complicated thing, and sex and love isn't necessarely the same thing. When I worked as a call girl I sold sex and I had customers who in their fantasies thought boughy love.
I liked this poem about moving on and not going back.

Posted: May 9, 2008

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