Unintentional Victim

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Poem By: LifexSucksxLovexSucks
Poetry

Tags: life, new friends, numb, feeling, pain, nothingness

i just lost someone who was my best friend. it was all my fault of course. but this about a new friend. she made me feel like i was actually worth something. View table of contents...

Submitted: Mar 29, 2008 Reads: 32 Comments: 3 Likes: 2

You’re my only true friend

You’ve been by me for so long

I felt nothing, no pain

No grief, no sadness

But,

As feeling returns,

To my poor travelers soul,

I can't help but wonder,

When my next unintentional victim,

Will arise to feel the pain and grief I cause.

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Comments:

poewhit

Maybe time to sit and think

Posted: Mar 29, 2008

this is really good! I like the words you choose.
Don't be so hard on yourself, you don't cause people grief... don't blame yourself all the time. You seem like a really nice person, and for you to be so down isn't good.

Posted: Mar 29, 2008