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Fashionista closet 1

Poem By: Lily Yu
Poetry


This is for all you broke Fashionista Jrs. out there!! Ugh the font colours are so tacky. Dress well out there!! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 6, 2008    Reads: 30    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


This is my closet
A magical place
With so many things
And too little space

With purses and silk and clothing and such

I dont think its the least bit too much

Don’t I sound like a fashionable Dr. Seuss?
I have over a dozen ways to dress my caboose
I buy it all
When I go to the mall
There is no such closet that I can’t fill
Believe me, fashion and couture take mad skill
Pul-lease don’t question me
I’m warning you I have accessories

Who cares if I don’t fit the size

I wear it anyway its my prize

So much shopping without a reason
Whatever,you are so last season


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Comments:

Humorous, and well written. A little childish for my liking but the form and flow were fitting and unstressed.

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

Author Comment:

glad u liked it:) the thing is I'm immature for my age...well not much (you wouldnt be suprised if you knew how old i am) Umm thanks again?? IDK anything about real litrature cuz im only in middle school...and im not rich and spoiled. Its just that know how to shop ;)

this is good, funny, and i totally can't relate, but it's good!

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks SSOOOOOOOO much!either your really optamistic orrrr i'm not too bad...i know many people can't relate to such an exotic closet, but I keep my eyes peeled 24/7 for the perfect things to add to my collection, and I'm a tightwad so that has to count for something...

haha that was cute. Why did you name yourself Lily Yu???!!!

Posted: Apr 8, 2008

Author Comment:

My friends call me lily...idk y.Yu...cuz i was eating sushi and typing at the same time...Yu as in like the pronounciation for fish in chinese...i kno i'm pathetic but thats Y everyone luvs me!



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