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So I just started writing poetry and this is a little rough. I can't seem to flow that well I'm no Robert Frost or Dr. Suess but I'm working on it. Any advice is welcome thanks.
Submitted:Nov 5, 2009 Reads: 64 Comments: 2 Likes: 1
Woken from a horrid dream
Stay here by my side
Protect me against my fears
from shadows creeping
for the darkness is crawling
silence consumes all
For fear is reality
valiance make believe
Darkness is given
for my light is wretched from me
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