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Submitted: Apr 30, 2008 Reads: 51 Comments: 9 Likes: 5
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NIce and simple. 7 thumbs up.
Posted: Apr 30, 2008
Sweet.^^ It was a wonderful little read MA.^^
Keep writing.^^
Posted: Apr 30, 2008
haha yes I was wondering about you. Hadn't see anything for a while.
This is very cute and simple. simple is good. :-D
Music is the dance within :-D
ok, gonna look at your other 2...............
~katie
Posted: Apr 30, 2008
Nice work MA
Posted: May 1, 2008
You have such a light touch and a simple way of expressing so much. At moment music is the thump of Motorhead from my teenager's bedroom and the happy humming of Mika from the youngests. So I loved your poem.
Evelyn
Posted: May 1, 2008
I like it! Short and simple and very meaningful! Good piece.
Posted: May 1, 2008
Oh hey! You could totally make this into a love sonnet! It's very sweet but I bet you got more to say about a love in your life! (the beat goes on....)
Posted: May 3, 2008
hi! amber. u've a musical soul. so short yet so sweet. ;-)
Posted: May 20, 2008
soothed my soul...thanks MA
Posted: May 21, 2008
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