Nightfall: Haiku
deep hues, darkness falls
twilight alights the blue sky
cool grass smells so sweet

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Submitted: Jan 27, 2008 Reads: 91 Comments: 10 Likes: 6
Nightfall: Haiku
deep hues, darkness falls
twilight alights the blue sky
cool grass smells so sweet
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Vivid imagery! Liked it a lot! My favorite line was the last one. I truly enjoy that smell.
Posted: Jan 27, 2008
absolutely beautiful.
Posted: Jan 28, 2008
Gets the senses going* very nice MA...katie
Posted: Jan 28, 2008
very nice, MA! You've captured some fine imagery in this Haiku.....Jerry
Posted: Jan 28, 2008
really wonderful.....Juliet
Posted: Jan 28, 2008
Beautifully lyrical
Posted: Feb 2, 2008
I love the smell of grass on a crisp night. :) Great job!
Posted: Mar 12, 2008
you are like one of the two people i know that are actually awesome at writing short poetry. wonder poem.
Lydia_xxxx
Posted: May 3, 2008
Beautiful haiku poem. Nature enhanced.
Posted: Jun 15, 2008
yes a lovely haiku here, i love haikus as vivid as this!!!
Posted: Jul 13, 2008
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