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Nightfall: Haiku Poetry

Poem By: MAmberConrad
Poetry


It is almost nightfall. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jan 27, 2008    Reads: 91    Comments: 10    Likes: 6   


Nightfall: Haiku

 

deep hues, darkness falls

twilight alights the blue sky

cool grass smells so sweet


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Comments:

Vivid imagery! Liked it a lot! My favorite line was the last one. I truly enjoy that smell.

Posted: Jan 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the comment.
MA

absolutely beautiful.

Posted: Jan 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you.
MA

Gets the senses going* very nice MA...katie

Posted: Jan 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
MA

very nice, MA! You've captured some fine imagery in this Haiku.....Jerry

Posted: Jan 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Glad you liked it, Jerry! Thanks, MA

really wonderful.....Juliet

Posted: Jan 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for the comment. Glad you liked it.
MA

Beautifully lyrical

Posted: Feb 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you.
MA

I love the smell of grass on a crisp night. :) Great job!

Posted: Mar 12, 2008

Author Comment:

I do too! Thanks for the comment.
MA

you are like one of the two people i know that are actually awesome at writing short poetry. wonder poem.
Lydia_xxxx

Posted: May 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Wow. Thanks so much! I don't do long poetry very well. For me, it feels like rambling. I'm the same way on face to face conversations. I keep it short and simple, ya know. Thanks so much for your comment!
MA

Beautiful haiku poem. Nature enhanced.

Posted: Jun 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! This is one of my favorite Haiku's I've written.

MA

yes a lovely haiku here, i love haikus as vivid as this!!!

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

So glad you enjoyed this one, I have a few other haikus as well that you may enjoy.

MA



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