Never sure
When the moon will
Sit upon the water,
Still unsure
Of when my voice
Will ever falter.
I see you there
On my shore
Standing alone,
You are waiting
Just ahead
As if you've known.
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On My Shore
Poem By: MAmberConrad
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Submitted: Jun 1, 2008 Reads: 54 Comments: 11 Likes: 7
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Very intriguing, I think it is about that the person you love knew where to be, on your shore. ???
Posted: Jun 2, 2008
Very impressive. I love the imagery. I wish you well and God Bless. Lisa
Posted: Jun 2, 2008
Oh fantastic!
Like you when fall and have someone to catch you.
Great allegory.
This reminds me of the song Two Steps Behind by Def Leppard. (sing with me?)
Posted: Jun 2, 2008
oh MA it is very lovely,
very soft and reflective :)
Posted: Jun 2, 2008
Aw, sweet! Makes me think of faith, that person is out there waiting, or knows where to be at the right time. A nice thought, a lovely poem! ~ Nixie
Posted: Jun 2, 2008
On my shore
Standing alone,
You are waiting
Just ahead
As if you've known
Yes for sure....AMEEN !!!.....
Posted: Jun 2, 2008
Loved it....love the intrigue surrounding it. Great piece.
Posted: Jun 2, 2008
An ethereal, mystical feel - pulls me in. I love it!
Posted: Jun 3, 2008
MA really enjoyable peice loved it ......
Posted: Jun 3, 2008
Love it! I got such a spiritual feeling from this poem. God is everywhere even on the shores of life. Waiting.
Posted: Jun 6, 2008
Very wistful......almost as if you're wishing for something that's moved beyond your reach.
Phil
Posted: Nov 15, 2008
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