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Poem By: MAmberConrad
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Something spiritual I'm going through right now. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 2, 2008    Reads: 51    Comments: 6    Likes: 6   


Searching
for the nearness of you
Searching
for something beautiful
 
Finding my way
with you in my life
Finding our way
together
 
Searching
for something in myself
Searching
in your eyes
 
Finding
myself
Finding
you


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sinse this is a spiritual search, would the 'you' in finding myself finding you, be your higher self? or the love inside you?
just wondering, is a poem anyway,,, I am happy for you, keep on shining
~katie

Posted: Aug 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Both, really. I'm in search for all things beautiful. Thanks for the read and comment, Katie.

MA

MA, This poem is beautiful in itself. It's one of those poems I think everyone should have a chance to read. When you find the beauty in yourself it becomes so easy to overlook the negative vibes that strive to destroy us. It also becomes easy to find the beauty in everything else. May your spiritual journey brighten your spirit even more and enlighten you in every way possible.

Posted: Aug 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, Vee. I've been meditating quite a bit lately. I had a bit of a breakdown sometime last week, due to stress. But, I'm back in the swing of things, taking care of self, so that I can take care of others. Thanks, Vee, for taking the time out to read and comment.

MA

Just lovely! The search is never over which is a good thing. As I remember a sportscaster saying last week about all the off the court work a tennis player had put in.... "It's not about the destination, it's all about the journery to get there!" Keep reaching... keep searching... and enjoy the journey!

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Aerosmith said it too. "Life's a journey, not a destination." Yeah, leave it to me to find something so inspiring in the great Rock N Roll of America!

MA

I echo Jerry's comment, as well as your reply. That is life to a T. Sometimss the journey is fun and sometimes we have to trudge the road to a happy destiny. All your new poems have been a treat. Hope all is well, Ted

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Gosh, that word 'trudge' seems so familiar....LOL
Thank you, Ted, for your wonderful comments.

MA

I sense the spiritual sense of your search in your words. Like Ted I think your recent poems have a wonderful depth and flow about them expressed most eloquently.

Posted: Aug 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, Anna. I have been meditating every day for the past couple of weeks, and it has done wonders to me.

MA

"Finding
myself
Finding
you"
This is such a powerful ending! I really enjoyed reading this one because we have all felt just like this!

Posted: Oct 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much for such a wonderful comment. I'm glad this poem spoke to you.

MA



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