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Something spiritual I'm going through right now. View table of contents...
Submitted: Aug 2, 2008 Reads: 51 Comments: 6 Likes: 6
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sinse this is a spiritual search, would the 'you' in finding myself finding you, be your higher self? or the love inside you?
just wondering, is a poem anyway,,, I am happy for you, keep on shining
~katie
Posted: Aug 2, 2008
MA, This poem is beautiful in itself. It's one of those poems I think everyone should have a chance to read. When you find the beauty in yourself it becomes so easy to overlook the negative vibes that strive to destroy us. It also becomes easy to find the beauty in everything else. May your spiritual journey brighten your spirit even more and enlighten you in every way possible.
Posted: Aug 2, 2008
Just lovely! The search is never over which is a good thing. As I remember a sportscaster saying last week about all the off the court work a tennis player had put in.... "It's not about the destination, it's all about the journery to get there!" Keep reaching... keep searching... and enjoy the journey!
Posted: Aug 4, 2008
I echo Jerry's comment, as well as your reply. That is life to a T. Sometimss the journey is fun and sometimes we have to trudge the road to a happy destiny. All your new poems have been a treat. Hope all is well, Ted
Posted: Aug 9, 2008
I sense the spiritual sense of your search in your words. Like Ted I think your recent poems have a wonderful depth and flow about them expressed most eloquently.
Posted: Aug 10, 2008
"Finding
myself
Finding
you"
This is such a powerful ending! I really enjoyed reading this one because we have all felt just like this!
Posted: Oct 5, 2008
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