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After a bit of a dry spell, I feel like I'm on the right track again!
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Submitted: Jun 2, 2008 Reads: 47 Comments: 12 Likes: 6
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summer is so hot to deal with, but i like this poem!!
Posted: Jun 2, 2008
Woo hooo pressed 'i like it'...this is COOL....summer back in India is terrible with 45degC BUT in toronto it's raining.....
lovely poem ...honey...
Posted: Jun 2, 2008
Serene and calm and warm is this poem, truly lovely MA
Posted: Jun 2, 2008
*smile* it's lovely here too. glad you are out of dry spell, and you should be, with your challenge you are helping to pull everyone else out too :D
Posted: Jun 2, 2008
Love summer-- just not the heat-- lol^_^! But wonderful poem-- I can just smell that green-grassy breeze. And I can just see those white puffy clouds as if I'm lying in a meadow or on top of a hill watching the sky. It's a simple poem, but it rhymes beautifully-- and speaks a thousand words that gives a lot of people a way to relate:). I love it.
Lot's of special chocolate to you,
Ghiradelli Girl.
Posted: Jun 2, 2008
Yes-- it deffinitely rhymed^_^-- lol!
Posted: Jun 2, 2008
I dont get to experience a great deal of 'change in seasons' being on the equator and all that,...but this piece helped me visualize the warm welcome summer brings....great!
Posted: Jun 3, 2008
I love summer and this a short and sweet poem about the beauty of summer. I truly liked it.
Posted: Jun 3, 2008
Well Written MA.
Posted: Jun 4, 2008
This is great. I'm a sucker for sun poems. Like the line with lazy and cozy (I'm never playing YOU at scrabble!) LIKE IT!!
Posted: Jun 5, 2008
I love this poem because it reminds me of the hot summer days and lazy afternoons. Sitting on the front porch with a big glass of lemon-aid. Family members gathered around sharing old child-hood stories, and every once in a while a summer breeze hits you in the right place. Plus, I'm a summer baby.. July 15th
Posted: Jun 6, 2008
hmmm....lazy cosy day....freedom....
Posted: Jun 8, 2008
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