Don’t wake me up
Before six a.m.
Gimme my coffee
Let me be
Let the sunlight dim
I’m not quite awake
Until three p.m.
There’s a sleepy in my eye
So don’t even try
To get me out of R.E.M.
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Upon Awakening
Poem By: MAmberConrad
Poetry
Hiralarious challenged me to write a story/poem, that had to include the following line: There’s a sleepy in my eye. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 12, 2008 Reads: 44 Comments: 9 Likes: 6
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Lol, love it xP
Ahaha, that is so me. I can't be awake until 3...or I whack people :D. LOL.
Posted: Jun 12, 2008
whitehart
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Loving it...:) Beautiful
Posted: Jun 12, 2008
These challenges are fun! You acquited yourself well. Easier than a 10 though eh?
Hiralarious gave me the exact same line. Check out my response, if you dare.
Posted: Jun 13, 2008
Well, okay, I like your poem 'even though' it is totally opposite from me!! LOL I am up by 5 am EVERY morning. ALways have been a morning person. But I do like my coffee!
Clever, cute and a fun read!.....Jerry
Posted: Jun 13, 2008
hahahhahhha SO Funny!!!!!!
you should post a picture of yourself at 3 am LOL!!!!
well, I am like Jerry also I like to be an early bird but not every morning. so but guess what???
I quit the coffee ^_^ YUP! been a week now. YIPPY!
take care sweetie, see ya soon ~katie
Posted: Jun 13, 2008
Describes me perfectly....I go to bed around 3.00am and get up at 11.00am ...lol....i am becoming an owl....
Posted: Jun 13, 2008
Hello,
i guess this poem describes us insomniacs well, but i win the contest cuz i cant sleep till 4 or 5 am and am wide awake by 9, beat that lol. You met the challenge head on, good for you.
Posted: Jun 13, 2008
You combined the line in your poem beautifully and simply. I like it.
Posted: Jun 14, 2008
MA, I thought this poem was so cute, short and to the point. I'm a morning person as well, Up at 6 AM showered, dressed, with coffee in hand and I'm good to go.
Posted: Jun 15, 2008
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