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Kitchen Bash

Poem By: Maple Bowen
Poetry


I've always wanted to give it a shot at writing some poetry, and so here's my first one! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 17, 2008    Reads: 56    Comments: 8    Likes: 5   


                        Swivel twist with a flick of the wrist

                        Elbows inching in boiling hot crisp

Bombarding booms that knock over brooms

Vanilla pie, lathered white whip that makes tongues drip

Glossy china soil and soak

Just like old country folk

 Deep inside the bumbling foamy sink

Taps of feet in a blink

Boom, click, bang, wham!

Nothing’s the same when you try the lamb

Exhilarating whiffs of crisp mouth watering food

Letting your nostrils slip in the mood

Sizzling patties on the grill

Smoking smothering for the thrill

High above plates tall and askew

The main dish – waiting till’ tim buck two

Climbing and scuttling to the top

The saucers slant from side to side

Till finally – pop!

There goes the cake round and flat

Just like that in a splat!


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Comments:

Ayyyyyyyyyy. That makes me so wanna eat a slice of cake. xD I like it, it's good. =]

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I think that's what I was shooting for...

Hahaha, that reminds me, I had cake today!

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Sweet! Me too!

Sweet poem :p makes me want some cake!

Posted: Jun 18, 2008

Author Comment:

HAHAH, I've got a lot of that...

Your Ver Good With Your Words. I Really Enjoy Your Poetry. Your Very Talented. Excellent Work.

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! I'm that great at poetry, because I just started to find an intrest in it, but I'm glad to know someone enjoys my writing! Thanks! =)
~Maple

Wow... that was awesome! the way you used your words together made me want to turn it into a song and go cook something!!! lol random i know... but it did... nice work!

Posted: Aug 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! =)

This makes me very hungry. I liked it. I'm a very visual person and I could invision everything while I read this poem. I like when I can do that. Very good, especially for the first.

Posted: Aug 13, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm so glad you had the side affects of reading this poem! When ever I read it still to this day, I get hungry too! =)

*has no words*
Man, that was so incredible!
The words just rolled off my mental tongue.
BAM! From the first line you already had my attention.
I don't wanna go cook, because I'm a culinary disaster, but your words make me wanna read more of your poetry.
Wow. Just wow.

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL, thanks! Yes, we don't want a cooking disaster...jk. I'm no cook either =)

That was a fun one XD
I love spending time in the kitchen, so this was very visual for me
Nice work

Posted: Sep 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! =)



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