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Submitted: Aug 25, 2008 Reads: 232 Comments: 9 Likes: 11
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I liked this it was good. But eventually Cupid's Arrow becomes worth it.
Love Always,
Erin
Posted: Aug 25, 2008
pretty...it makes you wonder and question yourself...i like it.
Posted: Aug 26, 2008
Everything hurts....
it's lyfe you just got to learn to move on or linger in the past
great poem and so true...!
Posted: Aug 26, 2008
Wow. That was really good. Short, but it says alot. Great job. :]
Posted: Aug 26, 2008
left alone to live in peace is the better... being shot by cupids arrow is a curse of a constant rain of endless pain and a hurricane that will perpetually turn your world upside down and leave not knowing who you are.
Posted: Aug 27, 2008
I like your exploration of contrasts here in a very simple but very effective poem. Try the Cupid's arrow, take a chance on love - left alone in peace you will never know. "Better to have loved..." as the saying goes. Good poem - tried to read your latest but nothing was there?
Posted: Aug 30, 2008
I agree, try the Cupid's arrow. This is a great read!!! "I liked it!"
Posted: Sep 11, 2008
Very good poem. I like the struggle of emotions in this piece. This is wonderful.
Posted: Oct 1, 2008
This is a cute poem. I liked it very much!
Posted: Nov 5, 2008
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