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Poem By: Marathongman
Poetry

Tags: love

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Submitted: Aug 25, 2008 Reads: 232 Comments: 9 Likes: 11

Like a fearless believer

In the beauty and the beast.

Spinning on a wheel of pain.

I want to find what hurts the least:

Hit by Cupid's arrow

Or left alone to live in peace.

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Comments:

Erin

I liked this it was good. But eventually Cupid's Arrow becomes worth it.

Love Always,
Erin

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

True

Haylieee Hamiltonnn

pretty...it makes you wonder and question yourself...i like it.

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

The Beauty is love. The beast is your ego. The beast is selfish,greedy, fearfull it has excessive childish demands of being loved. Love me, love me love me it's incapable of giving love. The Beauty is willing to take the chance to truly love and be loved. The human heart knows no fear it's willling to love. The wheel of pain is LOVE or FEAR. The chance for a mature,loving nurturing,selfless relationship or isolation out of fear.

Thanls for your comment

BLISS

Everything hurts....
it's lyfe you just got to learn to move on or linger in the past

great poem and so true...!

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for your input and positve comment - I got so many comments that it is hard to reply so see my comment to Hayileee Hamilton - Thank You

ashen

Wow. That was really good. Short, but it says alot. Great job. :]

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank You see my response to Hayileee Hamiltonnn - It's only because of the comments that I Realized What It Was About ! LOL

Peregrine

left alone to live in peace is the better... being shot by cupids arrow is a curse of a constant rain of endless pain and a hurricane that will perpetually turn your world upside down and leave not knowing who you are.

Posted: Aug 27, 2008

Author Comment:

The Beauty is love

The Beast is your ego

Anna Therese

I like your exploration of contrasts here in a very simple but very effective poem. Try the Cupid's arrow, take a chance on love - left alone in peace you will never know. "Better to have loved..." as the saying goes. Good poem - tried to read your latest but nothing was there?

Posted: Aug 30, 2008

Author Comment:

THank you for an inspiring comment - Crystal meth should be posted

thanks

erm1980

I agree, try the Cupid's arrow. This is a great read!!! "I liked it!"

Posted: Sep 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much definetly Cupid's arrow glad u enjoyed it

Anastasia Starlena
(not registered user)

Very good poem. I like the struggle of emotions in this piece. This is wonderful.

Posted: Oct 1, 2008

Author Comment:

It's another part of - Destined - and Along the lines of Dangerous Seduction - They were published in the local newspaper- looking back I was putting these flirtations right out there. - Points and Poison is another in the seriesLol) - Why go half way there were several women and I had no fear - I'm thinking about it now - What THe Hell Was I Thinking? lol