There she wasA sweet little vixenI couldn't resistShe's now my addiction
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Poem By: Marathongman
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Submitted: Aug 24, 2008 Reads: 218 Comments: 7 Likes: 6
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Four little lines...i love that they said so much more then just how much there was..people think that you need a whole look of lines when you really only need the ones that matter most
Posted: Aug 25, 2008
You know, this is really good, I've read some poems that have 15 lines and they completely wander, but you know what? Yours Is actually the best I've read all moring! :P
Posted: Aug 26, 2008
Well that is amazing
Just 4 little tiny lines can make so much sence to me
Posted: Aug 29, 2008
You definitely have a gift for beauty with so few words. I'm envious! I can't seem to write anything that isn't of epic length! Lol! Nice...I gave it a hearty 'I like it' ~ Hugs ~ K
Posted: Sep 20, 2008
Awesome. You did a great job getting a message with just 3 lines of words. I believe you have a great act for this and I enjoyed some of your pieces :)
Posted: Sep 26, 2008
Anastasia Starlena
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Ok I am smiling as usual. You are a force to be reckoned with I am sure. lol
Posted: Oct 9, 2008
This short, four line style really suits you! You say a lot of things in so few words.
Posted: Oct 28, 2008
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