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Submitted: Aug 24, 2008    Reads: 218    Comments: 7    Likes: 6   


There she was
A sweet little vixen
I couldn't resist
She's now my addiction


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Four little lines...i love that they said so much more then just how much there was..people think that you need a whole look of lines when you really only need the ones that matter most

Posted: Aug 25, 2008

Author Comment:

THank you I agree. You look like alot of fun I'm sure you will hear more from me

You know, this is really good, I've read some poems that have 15 lines and they completely wander, but you know what? Yours Is actually the best I've read all moring! :P

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much all the comments/ input has made me wonder what the poem is about see my response to Hayileee Hamiltonnn

Well that is amazing
Just 4 little tiny lines can make so much sence to me

Posted: Aug 29, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much it's 5:46 AM I just woke up amd you put asmile on my face thanks LOL

You definitely have a gift for beauty with so few words. I'm envious! I can't seem to write anything that isn't of epic length! Lol! Nice...I gave it a hearty 'I like it' ~ Hugs ~ K

Posted: Sep 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you - force yourself to use as few words as possible -
it is fun

Awesome. You did a great job getting a message with just 3 lines of words. I believe you have a great act for this and I enjoyed some of your pieces :)

Posted: Sep 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much I will check out some of your work

Anastasia Starlena
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Ok I am smiling as usual. You are a force to be reckoned with I am sure. lol

Posted: Oct 9, 2008

Author Comment:

May the force be with you as you are quite the force yourself

This short, four line style really suits you! You say a lot of things in so few words.

Posted: Oct 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for reading and commenting. I really don't know if I picked that style or if it picked but it looks like I'll be sticking with it. Thank you for the compliment like any writer it's nice when someone takes time to read your work



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