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The Smile

Poem By: Marga Manlapig
Poetry


Tags: poetry, love, smile

A smile says it all. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 11, 2008    Reads: 37    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   



you smile
and suddenly
even the grayest
sky
turns blue,
even the darkest
hour
is
illuminated,
even the sharpest
pain
heals.

my heart
sings out
your name...

...and i am
a lost
cause.


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Comments:

Very nice poem. The twist in the end make the poem more than just a simple little love song :) I think the line breaks really add to the poem.

Posted: Jun 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!

hi! marga. a smile is our intro to the world. no wonder ur heart sings. cute and sweet. lol. ;-)

(is that u in the photo.)

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Hi! Thanks for the comment. But, no: the person in the photo isn't me. That's my "muse", the guy who makes my heart sing. :D



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