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Dealing With Pain

Poem By: Marlee
Poetry


we all deal with out pain in different ways... but pain is something that will eventually consume you no matter how hard you try to avoid it. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 15, 2007    Reads: 19    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Darkness flowing, beating knocking
Veins, red, blazing as the setting ball of fire
Falling until it's gone
My purple blood pounding incessantly
Aches of the strenuous attempts
Sweat, from the inevitable failure
Sharp edges glaze the surface
Forming shapes of unnoticeable wounds
Tick, tock, tick, tock goes the clock
Shattered glass on the floor
I am no more


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Comments:

Very good read.... felt it all the way through.... check out Anxiety Heights from my end... talk to you soon

Posted: Apr 15, 2007

You captured those feelings of pain having the chokehold on us..very well done..something I could very much relate to. 5!

Posted: Apr 16, 2007



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