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Dimentia

Poem By: Massonic
Poetry


Tags: drug, dimentia

Don't do drugs View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Nov 6, 2007    Reads: 32    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


 

Dementia disassociates
Relating that which don’t relate
Connecting thoughts to sounds and walls
Touching ground and bathroom stalls
 
See behind the biased eyes
Framework infuriates cold lies
Truth inside intervenes
To all those spaces in between
 
Dropped my mind off today
Be back tomorrow down this way
Pick it up and fix it right
Fighting good fight, is that all right?
 
Disturbed, pent up, annoyed
See the plot tricked and ploy
Trust is something else
For someone else
Something that I may well destroy
 
Coming together to an end
This friend, however, is no friend


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Comments:

Very powerful poem with a really important message. I really like it.

Posted: Nov 8, 2007

Author Comment:

thanks

"Dropped my mind off today, Be back tomorrow down this way," loved this line. Another good job!

Posted: Jun 27, 2008

Author Comment:

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Hi there Massonic, I LIKE'd IT

The first four lines were actually beautiful in their raw honesty~as ugly and harsh a subject matter it may be. You communicated what you meant well.
Your writing (in general;)has a language that is all its own, nice.

~rain

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks, it may be a little dark, but there was a kind of dark enjoyment to this one too which I hope came through.

I would like to add that I think it was sad. I feel the pain of someone seeing someone else lost in such a drug induced dimentia~ what a waste.
~rain

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

I only got a quick tip of the tongue taste. I cannot imagine what it would be like to live on that otherside world everyday.



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