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Loopholes

Poem By: Massonic
Poetry


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Submitted: Jun 26, 2008    Reads: 34    Comments: 4    Likes: 3   


From nothing this creation springs
Out of nowhere a connection brings
Coherency through a storm
And the life sits still
Dying chaos, the life gives life
And a melody is born
I can lie, but my sould cannot lie
And though this melody may not be me
It is at least a cousin
That grows through the cracks
The loopholes in my mind


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I like the originality of perspective in this work. Nice job!

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks

Yep, everything you write is a little piece of you, that's what used to put me off posting poetry but i got over that. I like this line "Dying chaos, the life gives life" that's insperation at it's best. I also like the style you use, short and sweet. Another great poem! ~ Nixie

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Ya, you got it. This is always how I feel when I create music.

I admire your powerful message in so few words! That's amazing!

Posted: Jul 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks again

Oh yeah, I get this. I feel this way about writing and I don't always like the feeling of baring my soul. Great job.

Posted: Aug 12, 2008

Author Comment:

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