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Submitted: Jun 26, 2008 Reads: 34 Comments: 4 Likes: 3
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I like the originality of perspective in this work. Nice job!
Posted: Jul 2, 2008
Yep, everything you write is a little piece of you, that's what used to put me off posting poetry but i got over that. I like this line "Dying chaos, the life gives life" that's insperation at it's best. I also like the style you use, short and sweet. Another great poem! ~ Nixie
Posted: Jul 8, 2008
I admire your powerful message in so few words! That's amazing!
Posted: Jul 12, 2008
Oh yeah, I get this. I feel this way about writing and I don't always like the feeling of baring my soul. Great job.
Posted: Aug 12, 2008
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