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Short Poem with pic of breast exam because i thought why not? View table of contents...
Submitted: Nov 7, 2007 Reads: 65 Comments: 5 Likes: 2
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Hi Massonic,
I really liked this poem. I hope you meet your soulmate soon.
Phil
Posted: Nov 7, 2007
Very Touching words Take Care Juliet
Posted: Nov 8, 2007
"And with no motion at all, she will move me" - that is a wicked line. Reminds of the song, Paralyser.
I like how u r preparing for your wife and how u know how it's going be, but in the end, she will be your wife. For now, unmet.
Posted: Jun 22, 2008
Aww, what a sweet poem. My fav line was "even as she may create no motion, And with no motion at all, she will move me" That is such a beautiful line, and hope it's true. oh and I like the pic, just for the record. :) ~ Nixie
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
The last stanza was my favorite, but the whole thing was wonderful. The breast exam made me wonder though?? :) Great job with the poem.
Posted: Jun 27, 2008
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