
Random First Lines: The whispers deep within my heart,Have been going on since the very start,I’ve been broken… Torn... : Poetry » Read
San Francisco Homeless on the busy streets of Van Ness I used to drive by everyday. These were actually song lyrics written a long time ago that never made it. View table of contents...
Submitted: Nov 27, 2007 Reads: 50 Comments: 2 Likes: 1
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hi! massonic. u've composed a beautiful song. so let it ring true in readers' hearts. invite more readers to it as it deserves more reads. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jun 23, 2008
Aw, I liked this a lot especially the last few lines but this was my favourite "Been locked up and locked down in monetary mines, Just waiting for the sun to float away" as if waiting for there moment. I'm inspired! Did you still write music? ~ Nixie
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
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