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Submitted: Oct 30, 2006 Reads: 177 Comments: 10 Likes: 0
Out of the corner of my eye,
ever showing, always glowing,
An impression upon my mind.
Dreaming a huge, small, simple
ever going dream.
picking you out among every current theme and
Falling places, different faces,
always going, aren't you staying?
Session sunlight but I cry,
Catching ample, apple, strawberries
and cream
Whilst seeing you,
in the corner of my eye.
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whoah matt, just seen a whole other side of you. gorgeous imagery - tell me who it is!!!!!! or maybe you just made it up, you're clever enough anyway, but you can't really make love up. tell me!
Posted: Nov 3, 2006
Lovely. very heartfelt and tender. Would make a great song to woo a lady's heart.
Posted: Nov 4, 2006
Yes, love so colors our perceptions...nicely caught!
Posted: Nov 5, 2006
Lovely poetry and great imagery, fantastic!
Posted: Nov 5, 2006
I really love the rhythm of this poem: it flows and it stops, and then it flows again; that really works with your subject matter. Beautiful!
Posted: Nov 10, 2006
This was a cute love poem...very good! shi
Posted: Feb 9, 2007
this is really cute. awe. i like it. it touches my heart. keep it up! :)
Posted: Mar 16, 2007
This is really sweet, well worded, and well written. I love it.
Posted: Jul 21, 2007
that's really well written and very pretty xxx
Posted: Sep 1, 2007
I imagine that you're in some sort of resto, sipping a latte. This someone comes in, sits five feet from you and you catch a glimpse. Wow. really nice.
Posted: Mar 1, 2008
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