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Out of the Corner of my Eye

Poem By: matmoo
Poetry


Ahhhh, a love poem....

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Submitted: Oct 30, 2006    Reads: 177    Comments: 10    Likes: 0   


Out of the corner of my eye,
ever showing, always glowing,
An impression upon my mind.
Dreaming a huge, small, simple
ever going dream.
picking you out among every current theme and

Falling places, different faces,
always going, aren't you staying?
Session sunlight but I cry,
Catching ample, apple, strawberries
and cream
Whilst seeing you,
in the corner of my eye.


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Comments:

whoah matt, just seen a whole other side of you. gorgeous imagery - tell me who it is!!!!!! or maybe you just made it up, you're clever enough anyway, but you can't really make love up. tell me!

Posted: Nov 3, 2006

Author Comment:

I think it is possible to make up love...look around on Booksie and you can find a few other examples. In short, I'm not telling you anything...!

Lovely. very heartfelt and tender. Would make a great song to woo a lady's heart.

Posted: Nov 4, 2006

Author Comment:

Thanks...the best poetry is an overload of expression, or so my old english teacher once said.

Yes, love so colors our perceptions...nicely caught!

Posted: Nov 5, 2006

Author Comment:

Thanks!

Lovely poetry and great imagery, fantastic!

Posted: Nov 5, 2006

Author Comment:

Thanks! I'm glad people seem to be able to read and enjoy this one.

I really love the rhythm of this poem: it flows and it stops, and then it flows again; that really works with your subject matter. Beautiful!

Posted: Nov 10, 2006

Author Comment:

Thanks! beautiful rhythm, beautiful subject.

This was a cute love poem...very good! shi

Posted: Feb 9, 2007

Author Comment:

thanks!

matmoo

this is really cute. awe. i like it. it touches my heart. keep it up! :)

Posted: Mar 16, 2007

Author Comment:

thanks!

matmoo :)

This is really sweet, well worded, and well written. I love it.

Posted: Jul 21, 2007

Author Comment:

thanks! i'm glad you liked it.

matmoo

that's really well written and very pretty xxx

Posted: Sep 1, 2007

Author Comment:

thank you

matmoo :)

I imagine that you're in some sort of resto, sipping a latte. This someone comes in, sits five feet from you and you catch a glimpse. Wow. really nice.

Posted: Mar 1, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you very much for commenting and becoming a fan! I'm glad you liked this one.
matmoo :)



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