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I wrote this in an old fashioned Spanish village last year. It was a very sweet little place but much to hot at night to sleep, so i spent most nights writing, oh, and drinking a little. View table of contents...
Submitted: Apr 19, 2008 Reads: 55 Comments: 3 Likes: 2
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catacomb of rivers in the heart
Sweeeeet!!!!
So, you were thirsty in a Spanish village? And, insensible to the distresses of others but senseful enough to show your adoration by writing them into your life. This poem is so so so pole vaulting one extreme to another...ya think? The ole love/hate relationship. (god...i love it here, but it's so hot)(god... i love it here, but their destitution is consuming) (siesta/explosion)
Posted: Apr 20, 2008
I can't believe I passed over this one and didn't notice it! It seems so intimate, like an excerpt of a love letter. She couldn't be there with you physically so you brought her with you the only way you could by writing to her as if she were your a silent companion. It makes you feel alone even among all those people because she's not with you. It leaves a lump in my throat. Really beautiful writing Matt and truly moving.
Posted: May 27, 2008
There was this little niggling voice telling me to come back and read this again. I'm glad I listened to it. There is so much going on in this poem that I think I could pick something new out of it every day for a month. "Without you I’m another
shadow unable to take refuge from the days
relentless heat." The longing in this poem is haunting, especially with those words. You're so talented Matt. I hope you realize what a gift you have.
Posted: May 27, 2008
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