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A Spanish Village by Night

Poem By: matthew smith
Poetry


I wrote this in an old fashioned Spanish village last year. It was a very sweet little place but much to hot at night to sleep, so i spent most nights writing, oh, and drinking a little. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 19, 2008    Reads: 55    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


The solitude is broken by voices,
domesticity thrown onto the street.
The sound is echoed from whitewashed walls,
a catacomb of rivers in the heart,
soaking the heat; the relentless pounding
of blue skies.
 
The slow lumbering pace of a desert
landscape, where alien faces appear
from behind blinds. Dark watery eyes sunk
into decaying skin; amid a motionless
day where only the flies in multitudes
of annoyances flick from sticky place
to sticky place.
 
A newspaper stirs abandoned by a
stranger in a hat. Empty coke bottles
reveal the thirst that kept a country awake.
Now lost dreams are caught in the siesta
in this foreign culture that crawls, takes shape
and explodes into the haunting voices
of the night.
 
Without you it is all poisoned, cut short,
the voices sound frightening even threatening;
the solitude mocking. Without you the
church bell sounds like a gun fight, molesting
the dusty floor, echoing from the eyes
of the strangers, their indifference open
to suggestion.
 
The night walkers appear from the refuge
of old movies, from behind shuttered
windows and dark places. They emerge
and take comfort from the coolness of night.
Another sleepless village content on
the edge of reason, waiting while the world
passes by.
 
I am a stranger at their café bar
scribbling on a piece of paper, while
my subjects watch me in bewilderment.
In solitude among people I sit
unknowing, unknown. Without you I’m another
shadow unable to take refuge from the days
relentless heat.
 
 
And here above all is my subject,
sat alone scribbling your image onto
this landscape. And the refuge I sought
among these mountains, among these people
of tamed horses, bull fights and running blood,
was never enough to quench the relentless
pounding of my heart.
 
 
 
   


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Comments:

catacomb of rivers in the heart
Sweeeeet!!!!

So, you were thirsty in a Spanish village? And, insensible to the distresses of others but senseful enough to show your adoration by writing them into your life. This poem is so so so pole vaulting one extreme to another...ya think? The ole love/hate relationship. (god...i love it here, but it's so hot)(god... i love it here, but their destitution is consuming) (siesta/explosion)

Posted: Apr 20, 2008

Author Comment:

hi peachy, i love reading your comments they show you've really read the piece. yes this poem is all about opposites, the beauty about them is u have to meet them half way, an answer is met by a question..i think at times we can feel a part of a foreign culture and at the same time so alien to it. That's what i tried to get across. Ive spent a lot of time in Spain cos my mum lived there but u still c it as an outsider. Even people who live all there lives in the heat suffer from it, they just have ways of coping. Don't u think this is a metaphor for life? I posted this poem but it still needs a lot of work.

I can't believe I passed over this one and didn't notice it! It seems so intimate, like an excerpt of a love letter. She couldn't be there with you physically so you brought her with you the only way you could by writing to her as if she were your a silent companion. It makes you feel alone even among all those people because she's not with you. It leaves a lump in my throat. Really beautiful writing Matt and truly moving.

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

hey thanx sisi, and u understood the poem brilliantly. I wrote most of it in Spain last year, my mum used to live there so I spend lots of time over there. such a beautiful country. I wanted to bring out the idea that a beautiful familiar place can seen frightening when your recovering from a painful experience

There was this little niggling voice telling me to come back and read this again. I'm glad I listened to it. There is so much going on in this poem that I think I could pick something new out of it every day for a month. "Without you I’m another
shadow unable to take refuge from the days
relentless heat." The longing in this poem is haunting, especially with those words. You're so talented Matt. I hope you realize what a gift you have.

Posted: May 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh, thank u again sisi for your beautiful words. i like those words too, supposed to suggest that after the break up of a relationship u can feel like u lack an identity, hence the shadow, and something that we would normally love, like the sunshine, can in fact feel oppressive. Hope u understand what im trying to say. anyway, thank you again for your wonderful comments



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