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This is a very short poem simply saying goodnight to someone far, far away! View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 23, 2008 Reads: 135 Comments: 14 Likes: 16
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This is very sweet Matt! I've seen several of your good nights and they are always wonderful. I bet that whoever you wrote it for felt very honored and special. I love this one Matt.
Posted: Jun 23, 2008
This is jus so awesome Matt I had to come back and read it again. You're so talented and I'm so impressed by you.
Posted: Jun 23, 2008
How romantic, you should tell her to read them...she would melt! Sweet;)
~rain
Posted: Jun 23, 2008
After your great comments on some of my work I thought I'd look at some of yours. I was not disappointed.
This piece is delicate and for me its more about what is not said -the words between the lines-
It's sad and thoughtful (at least thats what i get from it)"shining near, shining far" was the line that stood out the most for. Like someone who is forever with you but not here at all: I love that image. Its like the promise of forever
An exquisite poem
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
Matthew so sweet, so sad. So simply, beautifully, thoughtfully, lovingly written - a poem to endure through the ages.
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
I love this..it's so tender and genuine. And beautifully written. :)
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
This poem has a great lyrical quality to it matthew. The rhythm is perfect and the word choice is excellent. Wonderful poem man!
Regan
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
Aaaak! I feel like I'm reading something so excrutiating personal that I just shouldn't have! How incredibly sensual and personal.
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
This is just the sweetest poem I've ever read. I loved it! well done!
Posted: Jun 26, 2008
This poem is a great read! It reminds me of some personal things in my life that have happened :)
Great work!
~Brad
Posted: Jun 26, 2008
short and sweet
it was lovely
Posted: Jun 27, 2008
This is beautiful. I'd bet she's head over heals in love with you after this one. Its a very sweet poem and I'm sure she'd do anything for you now. Lucky guy!
Posted: Jun 30, 2008
The passion is incredible!
Posted: Jul 3, 2008
lucky is the girl for whom this sweet poem is written...how did she react when she read this?
I am sure tears would have rolled down her cheeks...
u r such a warm person to be with...i can tell that even though i have never met you...
Posted: Jul 13, 2008
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