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Speaking to strangers is what all poetry is. It's about our birth, our experiences and our place in the world. View table of contents...
Submitted: Mar 31, 2008 Reads: 64 Comments: 6 Likes: 4
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I tried to step on the stars
but they fell away too.
Oh for every time I've tried to step on the stars ... usually fumble on the foot in my mouth and end up clinging to the star's rim for all I'm worth.
See...I just opened my wound.
No. i just shared my passion.
Posted: Apr 1, 2008
very, very nice poem. Welcome to booksie, Matthew. Speaking to strangers isn't easy but that's how friendship and love is born. Wishing you happy writing, reading and commenting on others work here at booksi. Cheers.....Jerry
Posted: Apr 1, 2008
This was full of vivid imagery. I had to go back and read it twice. I think that you did a really nice job. I always admire writers who can make poetry seem so effortless.
Posted: Apr 10, 2008
I started reading and this line seemed so famliar to me - "I tried to step on the stars but they fell away too". I realized that I read this a couple of months ago, but those words had stayed with me. That's a sure sign that you've done a good job, when the reader takes away part of what you said and keeps it in their heart for safe keeping.
"Opening up my wound so everyone can see what I
have lost" struck me this time around. You know by now that its so hard to bare my soul and this reminded me of that.
I always love your words Matt. Hope you don't mind the double comment, but I really do like this one.
Posted: Jun 3, 2008
Speaking to strangers is certainly not easy but i am sure now u know that through ur poems and thoughts ( soulful) , u have won our hearts....
Posted: Jul 13, 2008
'Alone everything is grey
and I’m surrounded by strangers
but which one is me.' My favorite line.
Nice one again!
Posted: Jul 27, 2008
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