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Just trying to express how a certain persons voice makes me feel View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 27, 2008 Reads: 77 Comments: 10 Likes: 8
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Matthew, Matthew, are there strings attached to you so we can pull you back down? lol. sounds like you are floating in love clouds ^_^
each moment with her is prolonged to such a degree through the uplift of joy that the entire day is encapsulated in passing thoughts of her. does that sound close? this poem is as if a dream is echoed throughout the waking day.
it is very nice to be able to feel the pleasures through reading this ^_^
~katie
Posted: Jul 27, 2008
This is very Beautiful Matthew. Such sweet passionate bliss. The serenity of each line is with gentleness of one's love expressed with such warmth.
Posted: Jul 28, 2008
slanting on the summer pathways
as I walk through the seasoned fruits of your
mind. Your voice caught the song of summer skies;
the lazy Sunday afternoons, lemonade
and a picnic by the playful river,
laying cushioned in your arms....
This is such a lovely poem...needless to say that this poem is so serene and effortless like a soft summer breeze in the evening...
Posted: Jul 28, 2008
what a cute snap with this poem...so sweet
Posted: Jul 28, 2008
the imagery in this poem is amazing :)
i could see everything. the entire scene, every detail, it created such a colorful picture! ^^
those final lines are so romantic! i'm going to have those echoing in my head for a while! so memorable and lovely!
once again matt, you leave me in awe with your writing. you are truly wonderful ^^
Posted: Jul 30, 2008
This is captivating. So beautiful I almost had a little tear.
Posted: Jul 31, 2008
Absolutely amazing. It flows so smooth and is so vivid. I really enjoyed it. You have a great gift :-)
Posted: Aug 10, 2008
hazy in the first throws
of morning
I listen to the sounds your voice gave
life to. We lay content sharing this moment
stripped to the nakedness of love, as your voice
sings in my heart of the pathways still to come.
i find meanings of love in ur poems and ur writings...
fresh...fresh...fresh...and nothing but fresh each time read them....as if it's written for ur readers'.......
Posted: Aug 27, 2008
charming... I liked your poem,really good
Posted: Sep 5, 2008
this is such a beautifl and amazing poem! I enjoyed it a lot!
Posted: Sep 20, 2008
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