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The Weather Forecast

Poem By: matthew smith
Poetry


What will the weather bring us in life? View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 8, 2008    Reads: 96    Comments: 13    Likes: 6   


They forecast rain today
not showers but rain heavy
and persistent.        
To ruin the walk we had
planned and the picnic
under the greenwood tree.
 
They forecast wind today
blustery and gale force;
it scatters the Autumn leaves
like falling rain.
As the litter is swept by a
spectral hand I am forced
to admit you will not come,
now you have had your hair done,
for the punishing wind will
ruin your smile.
 
Today is snow,
white like a fairytale in
April. The car is frozen
and you will be left alone outside
the gallery. Though you
will blame me and I
will blame the weather. This
feathered month of April
promised much, but who can
trust the weather forecast
or let a thunderstorm spoil
the day.
 
And after years of crazy
weather forecasts, a rainbow
shimmers in the distance and
the sun sets over a hill.
Hand in hand we walk muttering
how life rolled out its best.
Walking slowly,
whispering sadly,
we wonder what the weather will
bring when we reach the other side.
 
 


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Sweet and melancholy come to mind when I read this. It's vivid in my head as I read it, and I was also thinking the first stanza seemed like the perfect excuse to stay home with the covers pulled up over your head. You have quite a bit of talent Matthew!

Posted: May 9, 2008

Author Comment:

ha!ha! so u like to sleep in...so do i, if life didn't wake me up i'd sleep fprever. thanks for the comments. ive seen u around alot on this site and always enjoy what u have to say

Hi Matthew :-)
I enjoyed this.
yep we never do know what the weather will be do we?
I live in MN. so many times it is the main topic of conversation LOL!
I like the part that you say 'she'll blame me and I'll blame the weather' LOl.
anyway nice reading, I have seen you here and there but think this is the first time I have commented?
see you around ~katie

Posted: May 9, 2008

Author Comment:

hello katie, thanx so much for the comment, im sure to read some of your stuff very soon

Matthew why do you always speak of aging in your poetry? I'm betting you are probably 10 yrs younger than me but it seems to plague you.

I like to think that gale force winds mean someone is thinking very powerfully of you.

This also speaks of how women think too much. (guilty!)...ya right it was the weather! it probably was, but she'll think more of it.

Walking slowly and whispering sadly sorta sums up the whole tone...you've spent a year (4 seasons!!) waiting for something magical to happen with someone yet it hasn't. Some would think what a waste, while I believe I see in this poem that you gave it your all, and that's all we can ask of ourselves in life. And walk away proudly.

The rainbow shimmers in the distance (operative word = distance)...this is a very optimistic poem for a man to write and how you sell your soul to love (or hopes of**) yet doom lingers Matthew, in her voice. (words like frozen and muttering, scatters, forced are her voice).

What a very refreshing poem Matthew. I really like it.

Posted: May 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hello peachy, i love these moments when u leave such wonderful comments which always get me thinking. yeah i do write a lot about aging, and it does seem to plague me, maybe its cos it's something we have no control over. time ticks away for better or for worse. And it destroys me to see either humans or animals that were once young and vibrant become old and decayed.
I wanted to capture in this poem the idea that in life and in relationships we have to go through trials and hard times, nothing is easy in life, but hey we can still make it to the end. And walk with our true love through to the other realm whatever that may be. I know that sometimes my poems can seem a bit sad, pain seems to lend itself to poetry very easily. I also love the idea that something painful and sad can turn into something beautiful through poetry. However, peachy, im an eternal optimist. I believe in yes not no, love at first sight (why shouldn’t we fall in love with someone beautiful) soul mates, and magic. yes theres magic everywhere, even in stormy weather. And I love this web site because it shows me that many people love poetry, and people from all over the world take time out to read and comment on other peoples work. that’s the most beautiful thing for me, and shows me there are beautiful people in this world. More than anything I believe in love, what else can we do, we’re only here for a visit (that age thing again!!) so even after painful experiences, lets face it everybody’s had a broken heart at some point, we have to brush ourselves down and say love I’m coming to get you!!!
Sorry if I’ve gone a little of track here, thanx peachy for the wonderful comments, u make me see things in my work that I never notice is there!! I’m beginning to think I write poetry just to read your comments!! this web site just wouldn’t be the same without u!!!

Awww Matthew, thank you for the e-hug this morning.
(speechless)

Posted: May 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe, my arms are big enough to reach over the pond to canada, i think it is!!!!!

that was a nice poem. i enjoyed it. =)

Posted: May 10, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx for reading,

As always, wonderful work Matthew. The imagery and your emotional prowess of the written word is exceptional.

Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks mate, your words mean much!!!

Very well written and emotionally overwhelming. The visual imagery is just superb.

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

hey thanx for reading, your comments mean a lot to me!

Aw, matt I loved this. Sweet and delicate truths, it's funny how little things rely on the weather. I great metaphor for life! ~ KB

Posted: May 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hehe, thanx again for the great comment. English people r supposed to b obsessed with the weather so i had to write one. i was trying to say that life is full of hard times and disappointments but we can still make it to the end with someone we love

I like this. Rain is my kind of weather.

Posted: May 14, 2008

Author Comment:

hey, thanks for reading!!

I love the rain, not say I don't like the sun, both are perfect bliss in there own way. But the weather does seem to hold some control over us and our daily habits. I thought this was a lovely read, the ending made me smile! ~ Nixie

Posted: May 16, 2008

Author Comment:

hey thanx for reading and commenting. Living in england you have to like the rain, i like the rain in summer when its still warm

Aww, this was so sweet. I was deeply touched by it. I love your choice of words, and I could really connect with it. You have so much talent, and I envy you. You do such a great job with your writing. I hope you continue to write more. :D

Posted: May 17, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx so much for your wonderful and encouraging words

I like this.

The weather does scupper the best laid plans to meet with a lover.

Embrace the weather and its moods and adapt your plans accordingly... A walk in spring rain with a lover or watching the leaves blow round in autumn.....

Really good poem.

Peace

Boneman

Posted: May 18, 2008

Author Comment:

hi, thanks for your comments, and yes u r totally correct about the weather. glad u liked my poem!!

wow i'm rather late getting to this one.
another fine piece of poetry. it was enjoyable.
my favorite line:
Today is snow,
white like a fairytale in
April.

loved the metaphors used throughout. a poem very well written!
marvelous work ^^

Posted: May 18, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx alice. as always your comments mean much!



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