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Submitted: Mar 31, 2008 Reads: 97 Comments: 8 Likes: 5
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W-O-W!!
i love the figurative language used!!
i'm lovin' it!
Posted: Mar 31, 2008
That last line is really full of depth and reads great.
Posted: Mar 31, 2008
A rain that devours the seeds
and blooming will be in morning.
Let me start again.
I don't want to follow the moon.
Would people feel less alone if they didn't see lovers rushing the streets? Is it only envy? Or is it a dark lure that enables self sadness which is a bit too familiar/safe.
I am so glad you've joined Booksie and look forward to your writing. Thank you for making an appearance on my page so that I was able to find such luxury from your pen.
Posted: Apr 1, 2008
Wow! Another powerful poem "the aching sea","through waters where the moon fled" - beautiful images and thoughts. I loved this.
Posted: Apr 5, 2008
Ah, the longing of a lover and the eternal pounding of the sea. You write beautifully if I can take this first one as an indication.
Posted: May 9, 2008
I know this feeling all to well, the mocking of the ocean, the green sea! Interesting metaphor Matt, I like it. The ocean keeps on turning, and on the other side is clear blue water. :) Just a thought. You inspire me! ~ Nixie
Posted: Jun 4, 2008
Love is strange ...a mirage...i do feel the stab of jealousy in my heart when i see lovers on streets and those who r close to each other - physically and emotionally....
life, career, profession, etc etc etc...become more imp once we r married and we just lose the magic...
i guess this is life and this is love...which still keeps us together....
Posted: Jul 13, 2008
I LOVED it! Its really wonderful the way you have presented the whole of it. And loved the imagery! :-)
And i guess I know how exactly it feels to see lovers together, when you're in pain of losing one...
Take care!
nuttyz~
Posted: Jul 27, 2008
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