I feel like this piece describes how powerful it can be to have someone there to support you in life. Such a strong bond and partnership is very rare and you described it beautifully. I found this one to be inspiring. Thanks for writing it!

Posted: Apr 3, 2008

I have no words....really great work! ;-)

Posted: Apr 6, 2008

once again you leave me speechless. amazing talent and a beautiful poem. :)

Posted: Apr 7, 2008

wow, this is so amazing! i could really feel the pain you were trying to express, that's great! You rock! :)

Posted: Apr 7, 2008

Loved it! This part totally made it 4 me "in the moon, dropping tears
on to a cold darkness,let us stay alone
together in the dream
of her silver light.
Watching, watching
the sadness go by." I really think this presents emotion really well!
Excellent work!

Posted: May 7, 2008

Hi Matt: I completely get this one. Its a great feeling to feel insulated against the grief the world offers and to immerse yourself in that feeling of being together against it all. Its that feeling of pulling the covers up over your head again, only this time you're not alone. I love your imagery of the moon toward the end.

I love the whole tone of this one. It's really nice.

Posted: May 14, 2008

old age
hand in hand into
an eternity

AMEN...old age is the time, we need each other the most and then only we realise the worth of having a partner as loving and affectionate as she/he could be...i hope i made sense...

Posted: Jul 13, 2008