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We were goofing off so much this took us an hour. I was reading it out load and when it says glory I said Gordy. She says 'Why would you do that to Gordy?' and went on and on until we laughed so hard we couldn't breath. SHockingly, I still ♥ Jordan. View table of contents...
Submitted: Apr 5, 2009 Reads: 103 Comments: 8 Likes: 1
Roulette Love
Clever lines
Venom speaks
Down your throat
A monsters keeps
Slithers up
Velvet smooth
The venom spreads
Thoughts askew
Deliver the bullet
Whisper love
Tattered ribbons
Dress me up
With gloomy thoughts
In mangled mind
Unshattered glory
In fucked up design
Purpose lost
Soul diminished
Played the game
Now I'm finished
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How do you get your thought process to think of something this amazing? I love it.
Posted: Apr 5, 2009
Just stopping by to check this out before I continue on in misery my homework..... Again showing my laziness by not signing in :D I love it! How do you do it? God you can always impress me. :D and
Posted: Apr 5, 2009
wow this seems like something that should be in a song, its super good!
Posted: Apr 6, 2009
Bloody brilliant. It flows so perfectly and speaks so deeply, this is truly extraordinary work. *hugs*
Thanks for asking (well actually, telling) me to read this. It's simply... amazing.
Posted: Apr 6, 2009
Great loved the part where it says "Dress me up in gloomy thoughts" love your writing once again
Posted: Apr 9, 2009
Wonderful. I love the dress me up part, very deep. I enjoy your writing so much.
Posted: Jun 27, 2009
I liked it, Flooooowy
Posted: Jul 10, 2009
Love this one! especially the end you were writing so clean and smooth and then all the sudden just switched the tone in the last five lines. I love it. That's about the most fluent way I have ever seen someone use the F word.
I love the title, very creative. And the poem itself I can really relate to. though you're a bit stronger than I am at the moment.
Great read.
Posted: Oct 21, 2009
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