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moonlit world

Poem By: megs
Poetry


my first peom! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 20, 2008    Reads: 35    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


Now the day is over,

Night is drawing nigh,

Shadows in the evening still across the sky.

*

The sun has gone down now,

So must you and i,

But we end up missing the show up in the sky.

*

The moonlit world looks down on us,

This busy town, filled with love,

But no one really knows what is happening up there.


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Comments:

WOW! And you are just 13!! Double WOW!

This is amazing. You have a gift. Do keep writing :-)

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Big place outter-space ???????

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Wow! Cool! Great job! :D

Posted: Aug 20, 2008



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