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I am a bully

Poem By: Megzbo
Poetry


This is a poem I had to write in my English class. We had to write a poem about bullying so I wrote this to say that bullys aren't big or strong, inside they are wek and that's why they do what they do. This is what I think a bully is, let me know what you think and what you think a bully is. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Sep 7, 2008    Reads: 31    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


I am a bully.
I pray on the weak,
but it's me whos weak.
I am a bully.
I pick on the odd,
but it's me whos odd.
I am a bully.
I laugh at the loner,
but I'm the loner.
I am the joke.
I am the distressed,
I am the powerless,
I am angry.
I am jealous,
I am haunted,
I am grieving,
I am insecure.
I am a bully.


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Comments:

I liked how you showed the other side of the bully and i liked how you compared the victim and the bully to show that they are the same though mabye the bully feels more insecure than the victim on some level.

Posted: Sep 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, this was exactly what I was going for.
Yeah I'm not saying that the bully doesn't feel isecure or that they are the bad guy though.
Megzbo-x

xxjojo14xx
(not registered user)

this was gd coz its comin from the bullys view n u get 2 c how he feel

Posted: Sep 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah that was exactly what I was going for, everyone knows how the victim feels and doesn't really concentrate on how the bully feels and why they do what they do. But it's still no excuse ofcourse. Thanks for the comment!
Megzbo-x

You did a very good job..interesting point of view, coming from the bully instead of the victim. :)

Posted: Sep 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. Yeah I know, everyone thinks of the victim and not alot of people think about why the bully bullys and how the bully is feeling. Ofcourse, it still gives them no right to bully. Megzbo-x



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