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Always Alone and Dying - my take on the world. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 24, 2007    Reads: 51    Comments: 3    Likes: 0   


People smoking outside of hospitals

And those who die within

It's what you wanted

I don't want.

I'm in love with my dreams

A paperback scene

I'm in heaven with you

And a daydream serene.

Children crying in the backlit shadow

Groupies giving at the aftershow

I did my best to be there

It's what you wanted.

Liars lying in their concrete beds

Lovers writhing on silky sheets

It was always too much blood and sweat for me.

I am an anomoly.

I am anonimity.

I am abnormality

I am depravity.

Would you sit with me, or lay me down

Would you hold my hand and mend my wound

Will you be the one in the memories to come

Or are you the ones, sexless and numb?

Will I traverse the seas, on a sancript tide

Will I dare believe in the numbers and lines

I'd kill for just a piece of your Pi

I am the worlds undertow

Just passing by.


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Makes me want a fag, that first line...
Nice, I love it! Now... about that fag...

Posted: May 24, 2007

Author Comment:

SMOKE SMOKE. Are you smoking yet?

Really liked this one. Now this most definately could be put to music. Nice write.

Posted: May 24, 2007

Author Comment:

Thankyou, funny you should say that, as I had a tune in mind when I was writing it. Thanks for your support, always appreciated.

Gotta go with sinister Sister on this one, made me wanna smoke too.....hang on while I light this one up..... Great work Meth. The one thing I have never understood though, is if we don't conform to society, is we that are wrong, or society? After all, society lies to itself to fit in, I'm not bothered for fitting in....

Posted: May 25, 2007

Author Comment:

No i agree completely and I'm glad you got that out of it. Thanks for the support!



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