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Cinder Soul

Poem By: Methelusa
Poetry


Where are we, where are we running to? View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 18, 2007    Reads: 53    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


 

The beginning of a day, I'm with you and I wanna stay,

The beginning of a dawn, too late to walk ourselves back home,

Home.

But I'm not sure I understand, you bit my lip but held my hand,

But what of all the psychophants, did they falter in my hands?

Where are we gonna land? You gave me all that I demand,

What of all of our grand plans?

I'll give them to the soil and sand.

The beginning of the end, destroying every last pretence,

Think I'll leave that upto you, despite the dying embers blue,

Blue.

With setting sun and stolen gaze, hiding all the razorblades,

From the child inside my head, the one who hides under the bed.

Where are we gonna land? You gave me all that I demand.

But what of all of our grand plans?

I give to the soil and sand.

Where are we? Where are we running to?

Where are we? Where are we running to?

Where are we?

I think I'll leave that upto you.


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Comments:

Would it be sycophantic of me to give you another 5?

I honestly love this title, though it reads like a song again. The words of your poems are stronger in poem form. I want to hear the music for your songs. Are they on myspace?

Posted: Feb 19, 2007

Author Comment:

Sadly not, although plans are afoot should I actually figure out anything about the technology I own! Thanks for the support, again!

Yeah, I'm with Nick on this one, where can I listen to the music??

Posted: Mar 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Plans afoot to post a version on myspace maybe...watch this space.

I love the title, the purity of this piece was bloody awesome. I am truly sorry I have no grander words to describe your work, but it is awe-inspiring.

Posted: Feb 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Wow, thankyou, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading. Alot of my work is stream of thought stuff, whatever comes to mind, and it can make for interesting results!



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